Sunday, May 8, 2011

6 SENTENCE SUNDAY - May 8

 
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This snippet takes place in Chapter 1 of I.O.U. SEX, when the three friends read June's high school diary and come up with the idea to search for their old boyfriends.

      Kiki rolled her eyes. "Shit, if I'd known then what I know now, things would have been very different. When I think of the staying power of those eighteen-year-old guys ...." She sighed. "Too bad we wasted it."
      Peggy put her hand over her mouth to keep her drink from spewing out with her laughter.


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24 comments:

  1. Friends talking about sex. Who wouldn't like that? :)

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  2. I laughed out loud and the men at home asked me if something was off. :) Really good one - makes me want to read this book.

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  3. Great six!! Takes me back to those hs days...not everyone wasted those eighteen year old's power..

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  4. ROFL. Love the dialogue and last line

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  5. Wonderful dialogue. Great tone in Kiki's voice. But I'm surprised Peggy's drink didn't come out her nose! Great six!

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  6. These excerpts are so much fun. :) I look forward to reading some more from this story.

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  7. Haven't we all been there? *wink* A good way to connect the character with the reader.

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  8. LOL! Great characterization--fun six! Congratulations on writing together, that's a special skill not all can manage.

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  9. Lol - if only those 18 years knew what they were doing~

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  10. Ditto what Liz said. Mature men who know what they're doing beat an hour of fumbling with a teenager.

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  11. Great idea. Who wouldn't be curious about where they are now. And yes, they really had staying power back then. ;)

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  12. I did the very same thing with my coffee just now. Great 6

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  13. mmmm....I sense a cougar story....Love 'em! thanks for a great six!

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