Sunday, May 8, 2011

6 SENTENCE SUNDAY - May 8

 
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This snippet takes place in Chapter 1 of I.O.U. SEX, when the three friends read June's high school diary and come up with the idea to search for their old boyfriends.

      Kiki rolled her eyes. "Shit, if I'd known then what I know now, things would have been very different. When I think of the staying power of those eighteen-year-old guys ...." She sighed. "Too bad we wasted it."
      Peggy put her hand over her mouth to keep her drink from spewing out with her laughter.


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23 comments:

  1. Carolyn RosewoodMay 8, 2011 at 6:53 AM

    Friends talking about sex. Who wouldn't like that? :)

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  2. Rebecca RoyceMay 8, 2011 at 8:30 AM

    LOL!! I love those 6!

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  3. Kim KnoxMay 8, 2011 at 9:45 AM

    lolol, great six

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  4. UnknownMay 8, 2011 at 10:00 AM

    lol, fantastic six!

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  5. AnonymousMay 8, 2011 at 10:13 AM

    I'm with Peggy! Great line!

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  6. Zee MonodeeMay 8, 2011 at 10:16 AM

    I laughed out loud and the men at home asked me if something was off. :) Really good one - makes me want to read this book.

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  7. Marie DeesMay 8, 2011 at 11:23 AM

    Great Six!

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  8. AnonymousMay 8, 2011 at 1:04 PM

    Great six!! Takes me back to those hs days...not everyone wasted those eighteen year old's power..

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  9. LindsayMay 8, 2011 at 3:03 PM

    ROFL. Love the dialogue and last line

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  10. AnonymousMay 8, 2011 at 3:46 PM

    Wonderful dialogue. Great tone in Kiki's voice. But I'm surprised Peggy's drink didn't come out her nose! Great six!

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  11. lexcadeMay 8, 2011 at 5:17 PM

    LOL! Love it!

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  12. Jessica E. SubjectMay 8, 2011 at 7:20 PM

    These excerpts are so much fun. :) I look forward to reading some more from this story.

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  13. UnknownMay 8, 2011 at 9:00 PM

    Haven't we all been there? *wink* A good way to connect the character with the reader.

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  14. J.A. BeardMay 8, 2011 at 9:07 PM

    "Too bad we wasted it." LOL.

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  15. Lynne MurrayMay 9, 2011 at 12:09 AM

    LOL! Great characterization--fun six! Congratulations on writing together, that's a special skill not all can manage.

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  16. Jean DavisMay 9, 2011 at 5:23 AM

    Fun six!

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  17. LizMay 9, 2011 at 6:09 AM

    Lol - if only those 18 years knew what they were doing~

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  18. Liana BrooksMay 9, 2011 at 6:19 AM

    Ditto what Liz said. Mature men who know what they're doing beat an hour of fumbling with a teenager.

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  19. Chrystalla ThomaMay 9, 2011 at 11:36 AM

    laff, too bad indeed! :-)

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  20. Suzie QuintMay 9, 2011 at 4:28 PM

    Great idea. Who wouldn't be curious about where they are now. And yes, they really had staying power back then. ;)

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  21. Roberta WalkerMay 9, 2011 at 5:55 PM

    Ha ha! I would have to agree :)

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  22. Jayel KayeMay 10, 2011 at 5:49 AM

    I did the very same thing with my coffee just now. Great 6

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  23. LizMay 11, 2011 at 11:49 AM

    mmmm....I sense a cougar story....Love 'em! thanks for a great six!

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