Sunday, August 7, 2011

SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY - Aug 7


We really appreciate all the kind comments we've received on our novel, so this week we're again posting six more sentences from I.O.U. SEX. It's the story of three women who track down their high school boyfriends to give them the sex they never allowed as teenagers. In this scene, Kiki has rendezvoused with her old boyfriend Greg (who's now a televangelist), but things are going from bad to worse. He has ordered her to submit to him and he's playing way too rough.


Though a little wrestling could sometimes be fun, Kiki realized Greg had gone way beyond a playful tussle. He wasn't teasing.
"Obey, woman." Greg spoke in a voice pitched to reach the back rows of his congregation. He reached for her lace thong.
      "Like hell I will," Kiki growled, really afraid now and angry enough to rip the hair from his head. 


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25 comments:

  1. Freaking wonderful six! Very good description on the voice. I could almost hear it in my head. I'd definitely be afraid too. Great work.

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  2. Hell, I'd punch him in the nuts! Great description. Made me feel like I was there!

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  3. Oh, dear - 'obey, woman' is only ever going to lead to trouble! Nice six.

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  4. Hope she escapes unscathed! Love that she fights back! Too bad he turned out to be such a jerk! The encounter had started out so promising!

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  5. I hope she gets out soon :-) Nice 6!

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  6. Kiki's a tough woman. I hope she takes care of him. A great six!

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  7. Hmm, Kiki needs to watch herself around him.

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  8. Kiki is so resourceful, I think she can handle this jerk! Loved the six (and the book!).

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  9. Nope, she definitely doesn't have to follow through if it's going to be like that! Show us how she gets out of this one!

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  10. Hell, if I was that angry, I wouldn't be aiming for his head, lol.

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  11. Wow, I'd totally knee him in the crotch! Great six.

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  12. Love your characterization of him. Fun, fun. six.

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  13. Oh he'd lose that set! I could 'hear' his voice ... great six!

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  14. Nice! I agree about the crotch-kneeing. Obviously this isn't what Kiki had in mind... Can't wait to see how she gets out of it!

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  15. She doesn't sound like she'll put up with any crap!

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  16. Wow! Great job at describing her anger-we know it's not play on her end.

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  17. Fantastic six! I love her response. Thank you

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  18. Hi, Sandy and Sandy--Didn't have any other way to contact you, but wanted to let you know I just put up a review of I.O.U. Sex on my blog, Jenna's Journal. Loved the book and wanted to share it with my readers.

    Jenna

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  19. when all else fails, a good old kick to the groin speaks louder than anything

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  20. Obey Woman! Yeah, that'd probably piss me off, too! I hope Kiki ties him up and teaches him so manners.

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