After
a quick explanation to her grandmother of what had transpired, amid apologies
and assurances that the only thing injured was her pride, Elly headed for the
bathroom. A glance in the medicine cabinet mirror confirmed what she’d feared.
She looked terrible. Her hair stood out from her head like a red fright wig, a
smear of dirt stretched from her nose to her right ear, and bits of mulch
dusted her from head to foot like brown snowflakes.
But Derek kissed me anyway.
She ran her
fingertips over her lips, remembering the feel of his mouth on hers. Those
thoughts warmed her and made her wonder why he’d chosen that moment to make a
move.
Don’t question it. It was wonderful.
Then
a piece of bark fell from her hair onto her hand, bringing her back to reality.
She shook her head.
The man must be as blind as Mrs. Bagley or else really desperate for female attention.
The man must be as blind as Mrs. Bagley or else really desperate for female attention.
Thoughts
of those kisses teased her while she showered, towel-dried her hair, and put on
makeup. Once those tasks were done, she donned a clean pair of jeans and a
cotton shirt. She slipped her feet into strappy sandals.
I'm not really chasing after the guy.
She fastened one hoop
earring, then the other.
And I don't want a relationship with him.
She frowned at her
reflection and made a face.
What do I want?
She
spritzed perfume on her neck. Dammit, it felt good to have a man admire her. Maybe
Granny was right. A little flirting wouldn't hurt. Would it?
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Love this :-)
ReplyDeleteApparently a little flirting didn't hurt as much as the crash! Great excerpt.
ReplyDeleteAnother great teaser!
ReplyDeleteOh, I'm glad you brought Elly back! I'd been missing her. I like the visual images as she finds dirt and bark...and her internal monologue made me smile.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing...and for visiting my blog.
A little flirting sounds like just the thing. Go Elly!
ReplyDeleteWelcome back! This sample is great, with such internal conflict.
ReplyDeleteI like her back and forth inner dialogue. I think she'll end up pursuing him.
ReplyDeleteI think she should try a lot of flirting! LOL She deserves that much! When is this coming out? I want to read it ALL!
ReplyDeleteLooks like she's going to do more the flirt a little, more like a lot
ReplyDeleteI loved it when she thought, "He kissed her anyway." Sounds like a terrific story.
ReplyDeleteI could remember what that is like, that first kiss. But not feeling worth it. Then questioning it. Ah, first love! I love this story!
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