We're once again contributing six sentences from our novel I.O.U. SEX. It's the story of three women who make a pact to track down their old high school steadies to pay them back for the sex they never gave them. Prior to this scene, Kiki has learned that her former boyfriend is now a minister who preaches against homosexuality, and she's appalled by his message. She has discovered he will be speaking at a fundraising event, and she is determined to talk to him face to face. Here's what she encounters.
Kiki stood on tiptoe to see a man with bright pink hair shaking his fists above his head. A conga line snaked behind him, dancing through the crush of protestors. Soon more people joined the mix, pumping their placards up and down to the rhythm, marching behind their leader. Some thumped plastic buckets, drumming their outrage in a staccato beat while others blew whistles or tooted kazoos, creating a cacophony of noise.
When a TV van arrived, the crew’s bright lights brought the protestors’ signs into sharp focus—Ban Homophobia, GLBT Power, We’re God’s Children Too. The whole scene reminded Kiki of the 1960s, but those signs had read—Make Love, Not War and Hell No, We Won’t Go. 6 Sentence Sunday is the creation of Sara Brookes. To read contributions from other writers or to join in the fun, click on this link: Six Sentence Sunday
sounds like there's gonna be trouble!
ReplyDeleteLove this. I can hear the protesters loud (and proud) and clear. (Takes me right back to last month's Gay Pride Parade in Seattle. So awesome!)
ReplyDeleteWonderful description! But I wonder how the confrontation will go.
ReplyDeleteAwesome! It read like a scene from a movie...so vivid I could picture it all!
ReplyDeleteI could almost feel the fervent chaos! Great six!
ReplyDeleteI love how vivid the writing is. I could definitely see the chaos!
ReplyDeleteThis was really vivid, could picture it clearly. Fab snippet, wonder what's going to happen next!
ReplyDeleteI am so loving this story! Every week your six takes me back to a time I remember so well! Wonder if this guy is gong to cash in on his I.O.U.? LOL
ReplyDeleteVery visual!
ReplyDeleteFantastic scene setting here, I could almost see, and hear, the protesters!
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ReplyDeleteWell written scene! I can picture a riot about to break out at any minute! Tension is in the air! Great Six!
ReplyDeleteOh no, this doesn't sound like good news! Great six!
ReplyDeletePowerful messages in a very vivid scene.
ReplyDeleteDefinite conflict here!! Great six!
ReplyDeleteUh, oh... I suspect that conga line is going to get broken up pretty quick...
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