Sunday, July 3, 2011

SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY - July 3




This week we're including another six sentences from I.O.U. SEX. In this scene, June is remembering a weekend when her boyfriend from Texas drove all the way to Berkeley to visit her at UC. This took place in the mid-1960s.  


When he went inside the motel office to register, June waited in the darkened car, alone with her thoughts. Without Denny by her side, doubts and fears flashed through her mind as quickly as the blinking neon vacancy sign outside the car window. She thought of the other college co-eds who had surely been to this motel before her—maybe even girls from her dorm—and wondered whether they'd shared her misgivings. In late night confessionals, some of her dorm-mates had laughed at her naïveté, calling her old fashioned, amused by her good-girl ways. They shocked her with their drinking, cussing, and smoking; and their open attitudes towards sex left her wondering if she was the only virgin left in California. Though she'd moved to the most liberal college in America, she'd brought her Texas values with her.



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14 comments:

  1. Well it sounds like her value system is about to be challenged. Great six!

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  2. Just wondering how many women made it out of the 60s still intact... good snippet

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  3. I like the Texas values thought. Great paragraph!

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  4. Yes, Berkeley will turn a person's world upside-down the way no other college experience can. I sympathize with her misgivings.

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  5. I was young during the 60s, but I remember that time vividly. These snippets take me back so easily! Loved this six!

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  6. Very revealing without listing. Well done!

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  7. Love the internal monologue. Really moves the character development forward. Great snip!

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  8. I think this good girl is about to sample how to be a little bad! ;) Nice six!

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  9. Great snapshot of the times for many of us.

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  10. Great six! I could feel her pensiveness. Thank you.

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  11. I can imagine the challenge to hang on to one set of values, surrounded by something almost alien in contrast. I hope her decisions make her stronger.

    ~Xakara
    Dawn's Early Light 6SS

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  12. Jam packed Six! Lots going on in June's conflicted brain! Great Six!

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  13. Nice background info! Enough details without feeling overloaded :)

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