Sunday, July 31, 2011

SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY-July 31




Another Sunday, another six sentences! Again, we're taking our six from I.O.U. SEX, the story of three women who track down their high school boyfriends to give them the sex they never allowed years before. In this scene, Kiki has rendezvoused with her old boyfriend Greg (who's now a televangelist), but things aren't going exactly as she'd envisioned.

  

  Kiki crawled onto the bed like a tigress stalking its prey, leaned against Greg, and slid her hand up his thigh. "First let's see what you've got," she growled. She felt Greg stiffen. When her hand reached higher, she realized the stiffness was in his spine and not where she'd hoped.

     

     Greg grasped Kiki's shoulders, then her hands, and shoved her onto her back, pinning her arms over her head. "Submit," he hissed.


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23 comments:

  1. Dominant for sure. Kiki may have a lot more "interest" on her I.O.U. then she expected.

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  2. I'm about halfway through the book and loving it! I read this scene the other night and almost dropped my Kindle! Great six here. :)

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  3. Amazing forcefulness. Great six! Thank you

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  4. oooohhhh. I feel the need to purr!

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  5. A fight for dominance. Excellent six!

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  6. Wonderful six. I totally dug the dominance thing. Good stuff.

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  7. Thanks for all the comments! Greg seems dominant right now, but ....

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  8. Oh my! You cannot leave us hanging like that, pleaaaase! :)

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  9. LOL, really not quite as expected! Great 6!

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  10. Love the premise of this story! Great six. Unexpected :)

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  11. Loved the shift in power. It adds great sexual tension :)

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  12. Hmmm...I wonder if she's a bit over her head? It will be interesting to find out1

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  13. Oh I love it! Great six! I want more!

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  14. Ah ha. He's not what he seemed, eh?

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  15. Oh, it's the quiet ones you have to watch out for! Great Six. Looking forward to more!

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  16. Ha! The tigress was momentarily subdued! :-)

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