Another Sunday, another six sentences! Again, we're taking our six from I.O.U. SEX, the story of three women who track down their high school boyfriends to give them the sex they never allowed years before. In this scene, Kiki has rendezvoused with her old boyfriend Greg (who's now a televangelist), but things aren't going exactly as she'd envisioned.
Kiki crawled onto the bed like a tigress stalking its prey, leaned against Greg, and slid her hand up his thigh. "First let's see what you've got," she growled. She felt Greg stiffen. When her hand reached higher, she realized the stiffness was in his spine and not where she'd hoped.
Greg grasped Kiki's shoulders, then her hands, and shoved her onto her back, pinning her arms over her head. "Submit," he hissed.
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Gotta love a dominant man!
ReplyDeleteNice six.
ReplyDeleteDominant for sure. Kiki may have a lot more "interest" on her I.O.U. then she expected.
ReplyDeleteI'm about halfway through the book and loving it! I read this scene the other night and almost dropped my Kindle! Great six here. :)
ReplyDeleteLove his forcefulness
ReplyDeleteAmazing forcefulness. Great six! Thank you
ReplyDeleteNice kitty. Meow.
ReplyDeleteoooohhhh. I feel the need to purr!
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet!
ReplyDeleteA fight for dominance. Excellent six!
ReplyDeleteagree with Bree!
ReplyDeleteWonderful six. I totally dug the dominance thing. Good stuff.
ReplyDeleteThanks for all the comments! Greg seems dominant right now, but ....
ReplyDeleteOh my! You cannot leave us hanging like that, pleaaaase! :)
ReplyDeleteLOL, really not quite as expected! Great 6!
ReplyDeleteLove the premise of this story! Great six. Unexpected :)
ReplyDeleteLoved the shift in power. It adds great sexual tension :)
ReplyDeleteHmmm...I wonder if she's a bit over her head? It will be interesting to find out1
ReplyDeleteOh I love it! Great six! I want more!
ReplyDeleteAh ha. He's not what he seemed, eh?
ReplyDeleteAww. Now where's the fun in that?
ReplyDeleteOh, it's the quiet ones you have to watch out for! Great Six. Looking forward to more!
ReplyDeleteHa! The tigress was momentarily subdued! :-)
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